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Sobre o discurso do Obama

Não. Eu não superei ainda. O discurso do dia da eleição do Obama é pra ser visto e revisto. Traz de volta a tradição de textos que entram para a história instantaneamente, marca dos grandes líderes americanos e que andava tão esquecida na era Bush [se você se interessa pelo assunto, o livro de Ted Sorensen, speechwriter do Kennedy é imperdível]. Há quem diga que Obama só é bom para ler, e quando o teleprompter falha, ele se atrapalha. Mas que mal há em ser um bom leitor-de-discursos? Afinal é evidente que Obama, assim como qualquer outro presidente de país democrata, é apenas a figura de frente, cuja função é transmitir com segurança as idéias geradas por sua equipe/partido. E quando essas idéias são brilhantemente escritas e resultam num discurso eficiente é de se admirar.

Abaixo o tal discurso de Chicago.  E depois do jump, o texto na íntegra.


Barack Obama’s Victory Speech from Alphaman on Vimeo.

Hello, Chicago.

If there is anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our founders is alive in our time, who still questions the power of our democracy, tonight is your answer.

It’s the answer told by lines that stretched around schools and churches in numbers this nation has never seen, by people who waited three hours and four hours, many for the first time in their lives, because they believed that this time must be different, that their voices could be that difference.

It’s the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Hispanic, Asian, Native American, gay, straight, disabled and not disabled. Americans who sent a message to the world that we have never been just a collection of individuals or a collection of red states and blue states.

We are, and always will be, the United States of America.

It’s the answer that led those who’ve been told for so long by so many to be cynical and fearful and doubtful about what we can achieve to put their hands on the arc of history and bend it once more toward the hope of a better day.

It’s been a long time coming, but tonight, because of what we did on this date in this election at this defining moment change has come to America.

A little bit earlier this evening, I received an extraordinarily gracious call from Sen. McCain. Sen. McCain fought long and hard in this campaign. And he’s fought even longer and harder for the country that he loves. He has endured sacrifices for America that most of us cannot begin to imagine. We are better off for the service rendered by this brave and selfless leader.

I congratulate him; I congratulate Gov. Palin for all that they’ve achieved. And I look forward to working with them to renew this nation’s promise in the months ahead.

I want to thank my partner in this journey, a man who campaigned from his heart, and spoke for the men and women he grew up with on the streets of Scranton and rode with on the train home to Delaware, the vice president-elect of the United States, Joe Biden.

And I would not be standing here tonight without the unyielding support of my best friend for the last 16 years the rock of our family, the love of my life, the nation’s next first lady Michelle Obama.

Sasha and Malia I love you both more than you can imagine. And you have earned the new puppy that’s coming with us to the new White House.

And while she’s no longer with us, I know my grandmother’s watching, along with the family that made me who I am. I miss them tonight. I know that my debt to them is beyond measure.

To my sister Maya, my sister Alma, all my other brothers and sisters, thank you so much for all the support that you’ve given me. I am grateful to them.

And to my campaign manager, David Plouffe, the unsung hero of this campaign, who built the best political campaign, I think, in the history of the United States of America.

To my chief strategist David Axelrod who’s been a partner with me every step of the way.

To the best campaign team ever assembled in the history of politics you made this happen, and I am forever grateful for what you’ve sacrificed to get it done.

But above all, I will never forget who this victory truly belongs to. It belongs to you. It belongs to you.

I was never the likeliest candidate for this office. We didn’t start with much money or many endorsements. Our campaign was not hatched in the halls of Washington. It began in the backyards of Des Moines and the living rooms of Concord and the front porches of Charleston. It was built by working men and women who dug into what little savings they had to give $5 and $10 and $20 to the cause.

It grew strength from the young people who rejected the myth of their generation’s apathy who left their homes and their families for jobs that offered little pay and less sleep.

It drew strength from the not-so-young people who braved the bitter cold and scorching heat to knock on doors of perfect strangers, and from the millions of Americans who volunteered and organized and proved that more than two centuries later a government of the people, by the people, and for the people has not perished from the Earth.

This is your victory.

And I know you didn’t do this just to win an election. And I know you didn’t do it for me.

You did it because you understand the enormity of the task that lies ahead. For even as we celebrate tonight, we know the challenges that tomorrow will bring are the greatest of our lifetime - two wars, a planet in peril, the worst financial crisis in a century.

Even as we stand here tonight, we know there are brave Americans waking up in the deserts of Iraq and the mountains of Afghanistan to risk their lives for us.

There are mothers and fathers who will lie awake after the children fall asleep and wonder how they’ll make the mortgage or pay their doctors’ bills or save enough for their child’s college education.

There’s new energy to harness, new jobs to be created, new schools to build, and threats to meet, alliances to repair.

The road ahead will be long. Our climb will be steep. We may not get there in one year or even in one term. But, America, I have never been more hopeful than I am tonight that we will get there.

I promise you, we as a people will get there.

There will be setbacks and false starts. There are many who won’t agree with every decision or policy I make as president. And we know the government can’t solve every problem.

But I will always be honest with you about the challenges we face. I will listen to you, especially when we disagree. And, above all, I will ask you to join in the work of remaking this nation, the only way it’s been done in America for 221 years - block by block, brick by brick, calloused hand by calloused hand.

What began 21 months ago in the depths of winter cannot end on this autumn night.

This victory alone is not the change we seek. It is only the chance for us to make that change. And that cannot happen if we go back to the way things were.

It can’t happen without you, without a new spirit of service, a new spirit of sacrifice.

So let us summon a new spirit of patriotism, of responsibility, where each of us resolves to pitch in and work harder and look after not only ourselves but each other.

Let us remember that, if this financial crisis taught us anything, it’s that we cannot have a thriving Wall Street while Main Street suffers.

In this country, we rise or fall as one nation, as one people. Let’s resist the temptation to fall back on the same partisanship and pettiness and immaturity that has poisoned our politics for so long.

Let’s remember that it was a man from this state who first carried the banner of the Republican Party to the White House, a party founded on the values of self-reliance and individual liberty and national unity.

Those are values that we all share. And while the Democratic Party has won a great victory tonight, we do so with a measure of humility and determination to heal the divides that have held back our progress.

As Lincoln said to a nation far more divided than ours, we are not enemies but friends. Though passion may have strained, it must not break our bonds of affection.

And to those Americans whose support I have yet to earn, I may not have won your vote tonight, but I hear your voices. I need your help. And I will be your president, too.

And to all those watching tonight from beyond our shores, from parliaments and palaces, to those who are huddled around radios in the forgotten corners of the world, our stories are singular, but our destiny is shared, and a new dawn of American leadership is at hand.

To those who would tear the world down: We will defeat you. To those who seek peace and security: We support you. And to all those who have wondered if America’s beacon still burns as bright: Tonight we proved once more that the true strength of our nation comes not from the might of our arms or the scale of our wealth, but from the enduring power of our ideals: democracy, liberty, opportunity and unyielding hope.

That’s the true genius of America: that America can change. Our union can be perfected. What we’ve already achieved gives us hope for what we can and must achieve tomorrow.

This election had many firsts and many stories that will be told for generations. But one that’s on my mind tonight’s about a woman who cast her ballot in Atlanta. She’s a lot like the millions of others who stood in line to make their voice heard in this election except for one thing: Ann Nixon Cooper is 106 years old.

She was born just a generation past slavery; a time when there were no cars on the road or planes in the sky; when someone like her couldn’t vote for two reasons - because she was a woman and because of the color of her skin.

And tonight, I think about all that she’s seen throughout her century in America - the heartache and the hope; the struggle and the progress; the times we were told that we can’t, and the people who pressed on with that American creed: Yes we can.

At a time when women’s voices were silenced and their hopes dismissed, she lived to see them stand up and speak out and reach for the ballot. Yes we can.

When there was despair in the dust bowl and depression across the land, she saw a nation conquer fear itself with a New Deal, new jobs, a new sense of common purpose. Yes we can.

When the bombs fell on our harbor and tyranny threatened the world, she was there to witness a generation rise to greatness and a democracy was saved. Yes we can.

She was there for the buses in Montgomery, the hoses in Birmingham, a bridge in Selma, and a preacher from Atlanta who told a people that “We Shall Overcome.” Yes we can.

A man touched down on the moon, a wall came down in Berlin, a world was connected by our own science and imagination.

And this year, in this election, she touched her finger to a screen, and cast her vote, because after 106 years in America, through the best of times and the darkest of hours, she knows how America can change.

Yes we can.

America, we have come so far. We have seen so much. But there is so much more to do. So tonight, let us ask ourselves - if our children should live to see the next century; if my daughters should be so lucky to live as long as Ann Nixon Cooper, what change will they see? What progress will we have made?

This is our chance to answer that call. This is our moment.

This is our time, to put our people back to work and open doors of opportunity for our kids; to restore prosperity and promote the cause of peace; to reclaim the American dream and reaffirm that fundamental truth, that, out of many, we are one; that while we breathe, we hope. And where we are met with cynicism and doubts and those who tell us that we can’t, we will respond with that timeless creed that sums up the spirit of a people: Yes, we can.

Thank you. God bless you. And may God bless the United States of America.

15 Responses to “Sobre o discurso do Obama”


  1. Gravatar Icon 1 Gabriel Jacob

    Os discursos de Obama soam como um soneto triunfante. Não é à toa que o presidente Obama foi comparado diversas vezes com Martin Luther King.

    Agora nos resta torcer para que seu governo estabeleça novas atitudes diante de todo o caos formado pelo irresponsável G.W.Bush, mesmo que tenha que mudar os rumos do planeta.

    p.s
    no dia fui dormir às 4h da manhã, não antes de ver o discurso de vitória de Barack Obama. :P

    Abs!

  2. Gravatar Icon 2 David R

    e o povo finalizando cada paragráfo com o novo “amém”.

    rendeu um post!

  3. Gravatar Icon 3 Daniel Xavier (Atl/US)

    Fala Neto,

    Essa de o “Obama só é bom para ler” é só uma balela inventada pelos republicanos e requentada pela Globo. Moro nos EUA mas vi o Jô Soares sugerindo coisa parecida numa entrevista com FHC. Fiquei horrorizado com a prepotência. Nessas eleições eu assisti a CNN comendo pipoca. Vi todos os discursos, debates e entrevistas do cara. E, além do fato dele participar da autoria dos seus textos, não é exagero dizer que Obama é um dos oradores mais eloqüentes da história, com ou sem tele-prompter. São apenas posturas diferentes. Imaginem se ele fosse responder a pergunta de um repórter gritando e gesticulando como se estivesse no palanque.

    Abs!
    :D

    Abs!
    :D

  4. Gravatar Icon 4 pati rabelo

    neto, tb fui profundamente mobilizada pelo discurso dele. e seu post ficou tudo.

  5. Gravatar Icon 5 Pedro

    O cara escreve seus próprios discursos. E com a voz que ele tem, bem, até eu.

  6. Gravatar Icon 6 Adriana Salles Gomes

    Ainda acho que o discurso não foi como um daqueles dos Kennedys ou do Churchill, mas talvez não dê pra ser mais assim mesmo, outros tempos. O fato é que eu me emocionei. E copio o comentário q o Marcos Azambuja fez lá no outro post do discurso, mostrando outro diferencial incrível: “Quando ele entoa “yes we can” e a multidão repete com ele: isso é 100% uma cerimônia de igreja batista, onde o pastor fecha cada periodo com o refrão que ecoa junto com a platéia. Obama, SOUL PRESIDENT!”

  7. Gravatar Icon 7 Fernando Quirino

    Nossa, essa expressão da Adriana no comentário acima descreveu algo que eu estava tentando por em palavras… Obama é um Soul President mesmo. Mas isso não desmerece sua participação criativa nos discursos, sua eloquência e seu carisma. Ele passa a sensação de não ser apenas um fantoche, mas de acreditar e sonhar com cada palavra. Um bom orador. Para todos aqueles que acreditam que ele seja apenas fruto de um teleprompter, aí realmente beira o mundo da arrogância política. Sua campanha pode não ser sincera, seus motivos não serem puros, afinal ele é um político, está sujeito a ser corrompido, mas ninguém pode duvidar de suas habilidades de das habilidades de seus gerentes de campanha. Um parabéns muito merecido e um discurso que entrará para a história por uma confluência de fatores.
    Pensei em comparar a JFK, Curchill e King, mas cada geração e cada momento tem que ter seu grande orador, e essa geração americana ganhou um ao meu ver.

  8. Gravatar Icon 8 Douglas

    Pra ser bem sincero, eu preferi o discurso do McCain aceitando a derrota.

  9. Gravatar Icon 9 Renata

    É impressionante a forma que ele coloca o “yes we can” no texto na hora certa pra fazer o povo explodir! Ele fez isso a campanha inteira e não podia ser diferente na vitória. Não importa se ele só é bom de TP ou não, o cara é um gênio!

  10. Gravatar Icon 10 Neto

    Como disse o Daniel Xavier, acho que o Obama pode “colaborar” com idéias de texto para o discurso. Mas ESCREVER eu duvido. O texto é evidentemente escrito por um profissional. Na métrica e na cadência. É coisa de gente do ramo.

  11. Gravatar Icon 11 Zé coxinha

    2 coisas:

    – O livro de Obama, “Dreams of my father”, não tem nada a ver com o estilo e Obama escrever. Isso, segundo 5 equipes de cientistas sem contato entre si. Os mesmos conferiram que, por acaso, o ritmo do livro, número de palavras numa frase e vícios lingüisticos é IGUAL a um livro de um famoso terrorista, do qual Obama foi acusado de manter contatos…

    – 60 páginas, com fotos, explicando as técnicas de hipnose (!!) que Obama usa em seus discursos. Freud explica, e você pode baixar aqui: http://rapidshare.com/files/155903311/Obama_s_Use_of_Hidden_Hypnosis_techniques_in_His_Speeches.pdf.html

    God bless you.

  12. Gravatar Icon 12 Adriana Salles Gomes

    O que acontece, acho, é que essa gente do ramo é tanto mais do ramo quanto mais incorpora o “santo” do cliente. O ghostwriter de verdade usa não só as palavras, expressões e tiques do writer, e/ou suas idéias, mas também olha o mundo e trata o mundo como o writer olha e trata. E pra fazer essa incorporação, na MINHA opinião, o negócio tem de ser meio simbiótico, do tipo que não se sabe bem onde termina o writer e onde começa o ghost. Eu já fiz vários trabalhos de ghostwriting (até um discurso de político uma vez rsrsrs) e aprendi que, se o writer não se entrega, a coisa não rola como podia/devia. Por isso, certamente tem um grande mérito do Obama nos discursos, e não só por dar idéias de texto ou por ler bem o teleprompter. Sem diminuir o mérito do ghostwriter, naturalmente.;)

  13. Gravatar Icon 13 Bruno Gervasio

    Obama acabou de discursar e responder perguntas de repórteres. Está na cara que não foi ele quem escreveu o discurso, aliás, tal tarefa demanda um bom tempo, tempo do qual ele, não dispõe.

  14. Gravatar Icon 14 Daniel Xavier (Atl/US)

    Rapeize,

    Todos estes caras tem uma equipe de speechwriters, isso não é segredo nenhum. É profissão aqui nos EUA. E mesmo que o político não tenha participação na autoria dos discursos, o que não é o caso do Obama, temos que considerar que os speechwriters escrevem em cima das idéias e ideais dos candidatos. É o político quem faz a aprovação final. É uma relação, pelo menos, de diretor de criação. Mas pra não deiar dúvida sobre esse lance da oratória, peguem alguma entrevista do Obama. Procurem a última que ele deu antes das eleições pra CNN. É um outro estilo de oratória mas é igualmente eloquente. O cara é cool o tempo todo, mede todas as palavras, brilhante. E entrevista é vida ao vivo, amigo, não tem script.

    Zé Coxinha, calma, bro. Seu comentário me lembrou os comerciais que a extrema direita republicana veiculou aqui durante toda a campanha, chamando o Obama de comunista comedor de criancinhas pra baixo. Se a cadência e o ritmo dos discursos do Obama se parecem com alguma coisa é com as pregações dos pastores negros sulistas, como um cara chamado Martin Luther King.

    Abs!
    :D

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